A tree cant fall in love

by StillxBreathing   Sep 10, 2008


I could never be a tree
Or the kind of girl to lie beneath
No, I will never be a tree
Because a tree can't fall in love

I could never be a cloud
Or the kind of girl who'll sing out loud
No, I will never be a cloud
Because a cloud can't fall in love

I could never be a bird
Or the kind of girl that is unheard
No, I will never be a bird
Because a bird can't fall in love

But if you wanted, I'd be the shade
That comes from trees so you won't be afraid
I could be a tree for you
If you wanted to fall in love

Yes, if you wanted, I'd be the rain
That comes from clouds to wash away the pain
I could be a cloud for you
If you wanted to fall in love

So, if you wanted, I'd be the wings
That lift you up if you need anything
I could be a bird for you
If you wanted to fall in love

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  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I'm not sure about some of the lines as they were a bit too long, and I'm not sure about the repeating word rhymes in the first three stanzas. Saying that, I did like the first three stanzas better than the last three. I felt the structure was stronger.

    Brad

  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Very creative! I like it! Good job!:)

  • 16 years ago

    by angela

    Its nice to fall in love...haha..nice poem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaimee

    That, my dear, was unbelievably ADORABLE.

    :D<3

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