by StillxBreathing Sep 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
love is
I could never be a tree |
I'm not sure about some of the lines as they were a bit too long, and I'm not sure about the repeating word rhymes in the first three stanzas. Saying that, I did like the first three stanzas better than the last three. I felt the structure was stronger. |
by tigerdan
Very creative! I like it! Good job!:) |
by angela
Its nice to fall in love...haha..nice poem.. |
by Jaimee
That, my dear, was unbelievably ADORABLE. |