This is finally me

by Wings Of Flames   Sep 10, 2008


The paper mind,
I scrawl upon,
I long to send.

Tonight I will.

My decision,
Finally.
A final finally.

You're a sparrow in winter,
Leaving me for warmth.
I'm leaving.
Longing to be cold,
Now contently to warm.

I leave my paper mind,
For your chilling return.
Sorrow you may feel.
This sensation is me.

I felt ache in every morning.
The dew was my tear.
Tonight I have warmed,
Forever, disappeared.

Goodnight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    I love it its awesome!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Amazing..... a good piece that i never hesitate to give u 5/5.....

    the best n sadess line to me is

    (You're a sparrow in winter,
    Leaving me for warmth.
    I'm leaving.
    Longing to be cold,
    Now contently to warm.)

    well..... overall i like it from the start till the end......
    but pls don't tell me this is the of u writing
    pls keep writing..... =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Archangel

    I hope you don't feel too sad :(

    awesome poem, you're so talented.
    <3 Em

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