Now Shout! (remix wit new partner!)

by Dustin S   Sep 10, 2008


Me-

Well, I've looked and now Ive found,
A partner to help me gives rhymes the pound.
Soon enough, she'll step to the plate,
And show that shes comin to be great!
Hate if you like, but Im not gonna judge.
Her crazy side will give you a grudge!
Click Click boom, thats the sound of my bomb,
Like Saliva said, I'll explode from bein calm!
In my palm holds the key to beating my spirit.
Want a hint? Tint the window with my lyric.
Haha now I'm prepared for the greatest test,
Because rhymes will show what I expressed.
Now I need no chorus today, I got enough wrote.
You guys know me. Im not the kind to gloat.
Beats make my life, and I write my history.
Scientists will never discover that mystery!
Whenever I feel emotions, even when furios,
I try to keep my points that serious.
Curios how I do this? Ask my partner.
Understanding her rhymes are harder!
Be aware dear starer, begin to read,
What will make your eyes bleed!
Im done for now, over and out.
Someone say my name! Now shout!

Broken Wing- (partner)

Ive got things to do, Ive got feelings too
with my partner a rap champ no clue
oh! am gona write it , yea with you
standing there on the plate.oh how great
just beside him!ah DJ ma great rap mate
together we're gona hit break the ground
for the ardor of rap that we found..
you guyz dont know me ,no not enough yet
I got the words to refresh out my bet
Ive got the rythm to play out the tune
oh my deep side,you gona touch it soon
cuz I got the feelings to melt the ice
of the berg that wana cheap our price
cuz we're a notion raping true stuf
breaking the bridge of what's enough
with DJ that's his words gets too rough
confusing you by the feelings !oh is that tough?
maybe it is..but yo that is what our rap is about
we spill it out we break it down with feelings no doubt
its my self my style too dark so deep in law
waiting for the words of there's to bow
for our emotions written by gold
me and him gona rap so bold!

*You guys give her some time. Shes a new recruit*

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