A perfect day

by Obscura   Sep 10, 2008


I've been imagining a moment in my life so clear and peaceful such a beautiful sight with just me and her there is a place i know it has a clear blue fresh water where a river flows with the afternoon sun coming through the trees the wind sweeps down in a steady warm summer breeze there are roman ruins around a stone angel stares at us from its stand it looks down on us as we are holding hands sitting by the waters edge and i tell her i love her while I'm staring into her beautiful eyes as deep as the river as clear as the sky's i go to brush the hair out of her eyes and i reach over to kiss her and we stay there for the rest of the day just in each others embrace

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  • 15 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Wow rlly good

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    It sounds like a perfect day. the way you wrote it is like u want people to see it in ther mind and you did a good job with that. its very well written. i love how its so vivid! so amazing! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Bullets Are My Best Friend

    Aww i lve it.
    me and my friend though it was very sweet
    one day that will happen to you :) xx

  • 15 years ago

    by BrokenHeartStillBeat

    That got me in the heart, i loved it.