Together forever?

by heartless   Sep 10, 2008


Is it a dream
can you really be
together forever?
or will it all fall apart
when you really want
it to work out?
hoping he feels the same way
when you know he doesnt
dieing slowly, trying always
never knowing that one day
youll just fade away
so can you be together forever with someone
or is it just a dream?

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  • 14 years ago

    by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy

    I agree with the comments above ((especially Isabelle)) 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Isabelle

    I really like this one. It's really true and I recently had felt something like this.

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Nice poem =]

    it is a big question and thats why i liked it

    ~tia

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