Crescent Moon

by Lost and Delirious   Sep 10, 2008


The crescent moon,
tattooed to the black night sky
shining in on me, sitting on my bed.

Rain hitting my window,
blurring my view to the outside.

I'm locked inside my mind,
constantly thinking.

Questioning the world,
and myself.

The moon fades,
as the sun rises.

Another day of wondering begins.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I really like this one I can really picture it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Well, I'm not going to comment on every word because it was, how do i out it, TO GOOD FOR WORDS!!! There!

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Dude i love this poem

    i have deep obsessions with the moon and rain

    and i think ur poem rocks

    i mean "tattooed(sp) to the black night sky" AMAZING

    i mean the use of tattoo is awesome

    and "blurring my view to the outside" is a great lead up to the wondering part of it, like its kinda i cant really see the outside and cant understand it(but thats only my opinion about that line)

    and i love the wondering about yourself and the world(srry i know this is a really long comment)

    and the ending "another day of wondering begins" like its just something casual in ur like that isnt casual in most peoples

    i love it!!!! 5/5

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