i mean "tattooed(sp) to the black night sky" AMAZING
i mean the use of tattoo is awesome
and "blurring my view to the outside" is a great lead up to the wondering part of it, like its kinda i cant really see the outside and cant understand it(but thats only my opinion about that line)
and i love the wondering about yourself and the world(srry i know this is a really long comment)
and the ending "another day of wondering begins" like its just something casual in ur like that isnt casual in most peoples