Gorgeous Eyes Capture Her Heart. (Nonet)

by Courageous Dreamer   Sep 11, 2008


*Note: I don't ever write style poetry. But thought I'd try something new out. Sorry if my syllable count is off!

Gorgeous eyes so bright like the sunlight
Capture her forlorn heart and soul
Making her fall more deeper
For those empty arms
Waiting for her love
I love you babe
slips from lips
as she
smiles

*A nonet's format is set up like this:*
1st line - 9 syllables
2nd line - 8 syllables
3rd line - 7 syllables
4th line - 6 syllables
5th line - 5 syllables
6th line - 4 syllables
7th line - 3 syllables
8th line - 2 syllables
9th line - 1 syllables

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  • 15 years ago

    by Margaret Ruthfi Thomas

    Sweeettttt

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Amazing poem... very well written. The syllable count was off a little bit. But, that didn't stop it from being amazing. Great write...

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    I really enjoyed this. I thought the emotions seemed genuine. I did notice, however, that the fourth line has seven syllables.

    "For those empty arms open"

    For - 1, those - 1, emp/ty - 2, arms - 1, op/en - 2.

    But that's the only thing I saw that would go against the rules of the form. Everything else? Perfect, as usual. :]

    Five out of five. [5/5]

    ``Briana

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