Another piece that was so powerful with love. I too have heard those words of forever before and quickly watched them fade away into the darkness of the night. Excellent job once again 5/5 GG23...p.s. I'm not sure why you have this placed under explicit when there was no swearing or sexual content. If you place your love poetry under the love category I'm sure they'll get much more notice there :)

I really like your style of poetry. it really is refreshing after most of the stuff ive read. i really liked the emotions in this poem and i can really relate to them. though i was the one leaving. you should read my poem. the songs of light and darkness. i think you will enjoy it. anyway good poem you writ