I definately understand the need for love in this piece, it seems that there is always that special somebody who comes along and just makes everything in our lives amazing. We all need love no matter what...Excellent job 5/5 GG23..p.s. Always capatalize "I" :)

I really liked this poem. it was so different from the usual crap with forced rhyme and rythm it seems everyone writes. but this one had actual feelings in it and i feel the poem ws written around the idea, not the idea forced to fit into the poem. so great job i love it.