Guess I did Love You...

by Fabz   Sep 11, 2008


Ive just wrote this now... I saw my " Do I Love You" poem, and got inspired, This is like a part 2 of that one!

.... So tell me what you think, and what you think I should change/keep!!

I Did Love You

Because I cried subconsciously when our love died,
Wish you would walk back saying "Baby lets try"

I Did Love You

Because it feels strange without you by my side,
So I drink most nights to numb the pain of my heart crumbling inside.

I Did Love You

Because I always remember the tracks we made love too when the tempo got slow,
If I knew that was going to be our last time,
I would never have let go.

I Did Love You

Because I wish I tried harder to make u happy,
So we could be flying together like two white doves,
But now it kills me inside knowing I've lost my first, true love.

I Did Love You

Because I know I shouldn't but I play our track again and again,
Telling myself I don't love you,
But my heart knows what am saying is in vain,

I Did Love You

It's hard seeing you when I bring back Lil man,
All I want to do is kiss and hold tightly on your hand,
But now we have different lives, different plans.

I Really Did Love You

And my heart is dying bit by bit,
U have moved on,
But your love.....,
I'll never get over it.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Aww, no dont change this poem. its perfect the way it is, i have felt like this so many times, but the guy i am with now i know i would die. him and i have been through so much in the past few years that i know we are strong and get through anything. i hope you feel better and get over her. she is obviously dumb and dont know a good thing even if it bites her in the ass.

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is beautiful i will look at your other poems later

    but thias poem brought tears to my eyes i think it is truely amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ

    0mJ (0h My JeSuS) .. this poem is great .. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ

    0mJ (0h My JeSuS) .. this poem is great .. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Come What May

    I'm an English minor so I did notice a couple grammatical errors, I'll point them out in a second, but all I can say is WOW! This is a very real and honest poem. I can definitely tell you loved this girl, I just hope I never have to go through that pain.
    Anyway, so some grammatical changes may make this a more "proper" poem.

    Stanza 3- I noticed you said never "of" it should technically be never "have"
    Stanza 5- you wrote "saying its" I think what you're shooting for is "sayin is"
    and finally
    Stanza 6- Change the first Its to It's

    you don't have to use these if you don't want...they're just some grammar changes! But the poem doesn't really need to change anything! I loved it!
    LKR

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