I'm an English minor so I did notice a couple grammatical errors, I'll point them out in a second, but all I can say is WOW! This is a very real and honest poem. I can definitely tell you loved this girl, I just hope I never have to go through that pain. |
0mJ (0h My JeSuS) .. this poem is great .. keep it up |
0mJ (0h My JeSuS) .. this poem is great .. keep it up |
This poem is beautiful i will look at your other poems later |
Aww, no dont change this poem. its perfect the way it is, i have felt like this so many times, but the guy i am with now i know i would die. him and i have been through so much in the past few years that i know we are strong and get through anything. i hope you feel better and get over her. she is obviously dumb and dont know a good thing even if it bites her in the ass. |