Comments : Guess I did Love You...

  • 16 years ago

    by Come What May

    I'm an English minor so I did notice a couple grammatical errors, I'll point them out in a second, but all I can say is WOW! This is a very real and honest poem. I can definitely tell you loved this girl, I just hope I never have to go through that pain.
    Anyway, so some grammatical changes may make this a more "proper" poem.

    Stanza 3- I noticed you said never "of" it should technically be never "have"
    Stanza 5- you wrote "saying its" I think what you're shooting for is "sayin is"
    and finally
    Stanza 6- Change the first Its to It's

    you don't have to use these if you don't want...they're just some grammar changes! But the poem doesn't really need to change anything! I loved it!
    LKR

  • 16 years ago

    by PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ

    0mJ (0h My JeSuS) .. this poem is great .. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by PRiNCESS SKiTTLEZ

    0mJ (0h My JeSuS) .. this poem is great .. keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is beautiful i will look at your other poems later

    but thias poem brought tears to my eyes i think it is truely amazing

  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Aww, no dont change this poem. its perfect the way it is, i have felt like this so many times, but the guy i am with now i know i would die. him and i have been through so much in the past few years that i know we are strong and get through anything. i hope you feel better and get over her. she is obviously dumb and dont know a good thing even if it bites her in the ass.