Patience

by LoveTear   Sep 11, 2008


" My youth is slowly going with no use.
As all my three years spent it in the same room,
In the same corner, in the same bed alone in the night,
Asking myself about my existence,about my life....
What a boring life!
The same daily routine....
No change,
No friends,
No one there to talk with...
I just take a glance at my window,
And see couples outside,
Walking,
Laughing,
Beeing happy.... BUT NOT ME !
Confused between dream and reality,
I'm asking myself how could it be,
If all this time u've been with me...
Then in the knee i pray for my scope,
Yet all human wisdom is summed up in two words:
WAIT and HOPE.
And i belive PATIENCE is our cope,
Even some of them they say to wait is wrong.
But every single day of my life i'm condemned to wait...
To wait till my God will unite us,
Only me and him...
For God has a plan for everyone ! "

This is quite short and i think it's not that good, so i need some more suggestions 2make it better , if there is . Pls trully comment on my poem;any correction or adding it is welcome.Thanks

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  • 16 years ago

    by A. M.

    God has a plan for everyone. and sometimes we may think something is good for us, when infact it isn't and vice versa... You can choose to be patient and wait, or you can move on, but whatever you decide, God has a plan for you... I didn't feel any flow in the poem. You could work on it alittle bit more...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,it was a nice one but make sure that your love inshallah not going to be impossible coz if you truly love him and he truly loves you, so make sure that this love will never fade away.Inshallah god will help you in staying together for ever.

    nice poem.5\5.