Wow,it was a nice one but make sure that your love inshallah not going to be impossible coz if you truly love him and he truly loves you, so make sure that this love will never fade away.Inshallah god will help you in staying together for ever.

nice poem.5\5.

God has a plan for everyone. and sometimes we may think something is good for us, when infact it isn't and vice versa... You can choose to be patient and wait, or you can move on, but whatever you decide, God has a plan for you... I didn't feel any flow in the poem. You could work on it alittle bit more...:)