Livin' The Dream

by Ashley B   Sep 11, 2008


Just the way

he makes me feel

when he looks me in the eye

Makes me know that

I will Love him till

the day that I die

The Sunshine in his smile

the way he holds me

when I cry

shows me that he loves me

I'm not gonna lie

He'll Love me forever

Touch my beat with his hand

And I'm a better woman now

Because he's my man

And I can feel the fire in his soul

and I can smell the resonance of his cologne

you bet he's got the Best of Me that I've ever known

He has inspired me

To Believe in my Dreams

The comfort of knowing

everything is as it seems

For the past is back then

and the Future is now

And we're gonna make it

I know it somehow

He'll Love me Forever

Touch my beat with his hand

And I'm a better woman now

because he is my man.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm good starting actually, the flow was good but only the punctauation,, well i think u need to use comma's thats why we know how to read it, coz its continuesly that was only the problem but overl all its nice to read i can feel the emotions i give it 4/8

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    This was an excellent poem, but I would suggest that you group the lines into stanzas...it would make it an easier read the next time around! 5/5.

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