I thought the poem was amazingly good.
Buuuuuttt. It didn't flow very well,
I had to stop a few times to gather the
words together a couple of times.
Work a little hard on your flow and
maybe the rhyming parts could have
been a little less forced.
I like the little story you had created.
Very nice poem but could have been
better. Still I give you 5. :)
<3Tay

Very outstandinig lot of words that was really filled w/ deep emotions. the message has a great dedication and very powerful 5/5

Great expressions, and it has a gread deep emotions actually this is totally a touching piece more this line its very sad and it has a great words

Angel where are you on this lonely night?
So full of fear, love, and hidden emotions,
Will you risk your angel wings on this chance?,
Showing my soul the weakness in my mind,
Will you teach me how to fall in love?
Embedding your warmth into my heart,

that was so sad but filled w/ great emtions i enjoyed alot 5/5

Wow! it was soo amazinqq!
ii loved it.
dha flow was really qood and it was filled with lotsz of emotion.

"Angel will you please define love,
I'm scared that I will miss this chance,
Failing would change these small emotions,
Revealing the darker side of my heart,
Cold and pitch black like the night,
Please help me make up my mind,"

dhat was my favorite part.
5/5 (:

Well it seems like you enjoy writing this style of poetry haha I like it because it's rather unique and the repetition if done right is an excellent addition to an already great poem. I think that for love we must risk anything and everything, for love is the only thing that matters. Excellent job again 5/5 GG23

I enjoyed this poem not just for the simple things such as flow or rythym or things of that nature, but for the way it spoke to me, it was truely beautiful. Very well done, keep up the good work.

5/5