by lost in lovee Sep 11, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Now you're gone |
by ether
This poem is very basic. No real flow, no extensive use of language, no metaphors or play on words. And it's terribly cliched. |
by Valerie
I feel the same way, but don't worry. Not only is he blind, but he's really a coward for not making it through ! |
Definately the hardest part of love, even when we give everything we have 100% if they don't do the same we have no chance. Sometimes I ask myself if the heartache is really worth it....Excellent job again 5/5 GG23 |
I love this poem. Very well-written. So much emotion with such a gentle flow. The word choice was good and the concept was touching. 5/5 for sure! Keep it up! |