I love this poem. Very well-written. So much emotion with such a gentle flow. The word choice was good and the concept was touching. 5/5 for sure! Keep it up!

Definately the hardest part of love, even when we give everything we have 100% if they don't do the same we have no chance. Sometimes I ask myself if the heartache is really worth it....Excellent job again 5/5 GG23

I feel the same way, but don't worry. Not only is he blind, but he's really a coward for not making it through !

This poem is very basic. No real flow, no extensive use of language, no metaphors or play on words. And it's terribly cliched.

I'd say in the future for you to branch out a little more into some wider vocabulary to twist the poem out of cliche and into something unique.

Keep writing!

jess ~