Shiver

by Unrequited   Sep 11, 2008


Here, I am lost in
the cool shade
of a willow tree,
shaking its skin
in a blustered
wind as all
its scent
filters in.

fresh as infant rain,
this breath shall
sustain my age,
my love, as it
dawns to me
that I am
dreaming with this life,
in nature's cleansing
shadow-

I shiver in its
majesty, weeping
with the willow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I find no errors in this poem, but just pure beauty. I love the way you write, and this one really touched me. This line here, created a nice effect and was perfect for the ending part.

    "I shiver in its
    majesty, weeping
    with the willow."

    Stunning! :)
    Keep writing, always and forever....

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