I like it. A bit confusing, and creepy, but i like it. good write. 4/5

It is amazing..good work

5/5

These word just make me think of how life really is. how we're given a chance to survive for ourselves but at the sametime everything is taken away. And we're given this chance without even asking if we want it. so what some of us do? we try bad to go back. anyway. this is what your poem made me think of when i read it. great job!!

Wow. this was extremely mesmerizing to me. it was somewhat inspirational as well. these are the kinds of things i enjoy reading the most, a piece of work about life itself. you filled this piece with such emotion, and determination, i could feel it. beautiful job. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

This is very interesting. The title had me gripped as did the entire piece. Definatly the most cool as in creative piece so far; in my opinion. I don't really know why I like it so much, I just know I do like it. The word choice is absolutely amazing and the description is fantastically shown. There is emotion as well as thought in this piece and that makes it stand out even more. The tone is there and very clear. All in all, Excellent piece, 5/5 from me.