Comments : Where Dancers Used To Be

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Tree's grow from the stone

    ^^ no apostrophe.

    So at first, I didn't realize this was a reference to the Dance Hall. But then i figured it out, right as you said pillars. I dont like that the dance hall fell...but there's something to ruin even from the ruins..

    very pretty, visual poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    This is gorgeous. creates a beautiful picture in my mind, very very creative and descriptive. great job.