by jLegendc Sep 12, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The night was still young, |
HEY THIS IS A FANTASTIC POEM, THERES A LOT OF FEELINGS HERE AND IT HAS A GOOD RYTHM |
by ReBecca
Dutch courage, huh? I know, I've been there too. I liked how in the end you won the girl and she felt the same as you. I hope it is a true story for you. You expressed what you were feeling very clearly. Good Job. |
by Sweet lig
Wow that was the result of alcohol, well u had portrayed well what u trying to express, and it has a great expression. sweet and filled w/ powerful emotions that im sure anyone can realate about it. it has an excellent dedication just keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel. i enjoyed alot about the message 5/5 |
by Robert
This was a good poem abit too long but the story was good and the message was both entertaining and intresting all and all good flow good job Plot121. |
by MwithoutK
This is my favorite poem i have read on this site... i can totally imagin everything you say... did this really happen to you? pm me! |