WOW.... WOW.... WOW.... amazing... a story inside a poem. ireally loved how you described how your love for her was bigger than the alcohol intoxication. greatly written... just... so real and true. i loved it, sir. 5/5
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Hmmmm that was very outstanding.. there are lots of words that filled with emotions most of that there are also some lessons that we can keep it our mind.. great dedication to everyone. the message was powerful, and i guess it perfect to express all the deep words. very well written just keep on writing all what u feel! its long but it has a lots of encouranging words that i enjoyed a lot.. 5/5

Wow it's left me speechless! Really powerful write, i loved the way the storey flowed and couldnt wait to keep reading to find out her reaction i enjoyed every word. well done keep up the good work hun xxx

This is one even a recovering alcoholic could get into. Passion is indeed a powerful stimulant as this well written poem romanticallly suggests

Wow! itsz amazinqq!
dha flow was qood and ii could feel dha emotion.
my favorite part was
"Rejection is nothing but an acceptance,
Confession is risking your chance,
Being afraid will just give you regrets,
Because that hidden feeling is the one thing
you can never forget...."

5/5 (:

This is my favorite poem i have read on this site... i can totally imagin everything you say... did this really happen to you? pm me!

This was a good poem abit too long but the story was good and the message was both entertaining and intresting all and all good flow good job Plot121.

Wow that was the result of alcohol, well u had portrayed well what u trying to express, and it has a great expression. sweet and filled w/ powerful emotions that im sure anyone can realate about it. it has an excellent dedication just keep it up and keep on writing all what u feel. i enjoyed alot about the message 5/5

Dutch courage, huh? I know, I've been there too. I liked how in the end you won the girl and she felt the same as you. I hope it is a true story for you. You expressed what you were feeling very clearly. Good Job.

HEY THIS IS A FANTASTIC POEM, THERES A LOT OF FEELINGS HERE AND IT HAS A GOOD RYTHM