Comments : Crimson

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    In this dark cold silence
    I can't overwhelm my inferior existence
    Stayed forbidden in this crucial den
    Is there any chance for me to be forgiven?

    *upcorz!! learn to accept your mistakes and learn to forgive yourself first and ask forgiveness of the person you had done something!! if he/she did not responce according to your expected!! no need to feel sad!! or worry!! nor guilt coz ur duty to appologize is finish!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I love the wording you use throught your peoms...its very unique. Very well written once again...

    5/5