Cool poem!!! =) 5/5

This is beautiful Cody!
There's so much in it, so much that you covered, its truly beautiful

I can't describe it any other way, its simply beautiful <3

HI.
I enjoyed your poem, and yes relationships do not always go as we sometimes hope they might.
Second stanza third line the word take should be taken, it spoils the line as it is.
Otherwise your poem was quite good though you might want to try and get a more even syllable count from line to line.
Well done good poem

Grant