Far to many young girls fall victim to the street and it's sad because all they need is some love and support to change their lifestyle. Excellent write about a very true topic....5/5 GG23

Wow this was so deep and emotional you truly told a sad story. So many lose themselves in this street life and are treated like a piece of meat used only for pleasure. Its hard for them to move on from the pain and go towards finding someone to love because every man they look at they think only wants them for pleasure. What an interesting topic you choice to write about I just wish it was longer.

Well done.

*5/5*

In the last line, if you say 'wholly' then doesn't that mean you don't need "different" after it? I'm not too sure.

I like this, it kept me reading throughout and the meaning is good. And I did enjoy how the ending rounded the piece off nicely. 5/5

jess ~

Beautiful and sad at the same time, you can really feel the emotion comming through.

"Waiting for her "pretty woman" moment "

I have watched the movie "Pretty Woman" so I can guess that I know exactly what you are refering to, I lvoe that you connected to something that other people can really know, great idea :)

5/5

This was a very sad piece, yet it is true and it does happen. But, you did a really good job with this, and I don't think I need to go into further explination :] So well done. 5/5.