Paul,

You are so right: love is all that matters.
People who are afraid to have their heart broken, often end up alone and bitter.
You have to always dare to love and when you've given it your all and fail, then you know it was not your fault.
Love hurts, yes...but loneliness hurts way more;)
Great poem, sweetheart..keep them coming!

Hugs,
5/5 Ingrid

This is rly true but, no offense intended, it's a bit cliche. I think if you broke it up into a few stanzas and wrote the experierce from your own original perspective it would be outstanding.

but it has lots of potential