Our Story

by Paiger   Sep 12, 2008


I still remember
when we first met
by the track
all cold and wet

I even remember
the look in your eyes
I could have never for told
that they could tell such lies

And all the long day,
we talked, joked and laughed
you made me think,
that this feeling could never pass

And so I asked you to come
I thought I would be too late
but you said yes
you even called it a date

And so all your secrets you spilled
all your stories you told
but I did not know that
your true heart you would withhold

You talked of how
we were so much alike
but in truth, our values
couldn't be more unalike

And so the night,
of which we have yet to discus
the big event,
that ended "us"

Some tried to warn me,
but louder voices said
that she wouldn't do that
to just think of the great night ahead

So infront of me,
you two had your love affair
the sight of your faces,
I can no longer bare

You even faked a kind gesture,
a disguise for much more
it was at that moment
That my heart tore

That was all I could take,
I had to depart
before my anger and sadness
flodded my heart

So the next day
I had my proof,
the others had seen you
kissing under the slate roof

Now I know it meant nothing,
you never cared about me,
but it's going to be fine,
My heart is back where it's meant to be

But in the end I feel sorry
for you, friend of days gone by
because life can't be pleasant,
when your living it in a lie

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  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow, this was a very good poem. wonderfully wriiten and i could feel the emotion of just wat you were going through.
    great job

    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well 1st of all i would like to thx u for sharing this poem...i'm sure somewhere out there there are some teenage girls who are facingor have face the same situation as u...but well dun be dishearted...I'm sure the right one will come ur way when u least expect it...'Our Story' is indeed a Great Story
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by i care about him

    Great poem. I really relate to your poems well. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticSoul

    I really like this poem its much like my story and i can feel the pain in your words bc i once felt it too. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I really enjoyed this one. some parts in the beginning were things I've felt and had heard/seen. everything seemed clear and the story in the poem was nice to read, and sad. Good stuff. =)