I really enjoyed this one. some parts in the beginning were things I've felt and had heard/seen. everything seemed clear and the story in the poem was nice to read, and sad. Good stuff. =)

I really like this poem its much like my story and i can feel the pain in your words bc i once felt it too. Good job!

Great poem. I really relate to your poems well. Keep writing!

Well 1st of all i would like to thx u for sharing this poem...i'm sure somewhere out there there are some teenage girls who are facingor have face the same situation as u...but well dun be dishearted...I'm sure the right one will come ur way when u least expect it...'Our Story' is indeed a Great Story
5/5

Wow, this was a very good poem. wonderfully wriiten and i could feel the emotion of just wat you were going through.
great job

keep it up