by Ignoris Sep 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm lying on the ground |
by thehangman
Excellent use of language, another great thought provoking poem! |
Great metaphor, great flow. Good job on sticking with the theme and tying everything together. You romanticized this to just the right extent. I love it : ) |
This was beautiful, I loved the flow and the imagery. Definitely a piece I can relate to really well right now. You've got tons of talent; 5/5 |