by Indian Comma Bean Sep 13, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Like clockwork, the sun sets |
by Corinne
You have a very fresh, original way of writing about the subject matter. A wonderful painting with words. |
by Sweetdream
I love the story feel that this poem has and I loved the point you make about the nature of life, living and survival. Great word choice and wonderful flow! A+ |