That was alright.

Simple, yet powerfully emotionally and so strong imagery.
You have talent and i loved it.
wow

Well. This was not what i expected to be honest. It was good, ill give it that. Sometimes though, the overall meaning of the poem kinda got away from me, but i see it now.. i wish i could write more into this, but for some reason i simply cant. This made me feel oddly.. content.
Good job.
5/5