Awww omg this poem was so fun to write, even though it took like, what 20 mins to write? lol XD umm your lines were awesome, so great and descriptive. I loved writing with you, it was a joy to do it.

5/5 of course!!! hehe

Extremely vivid write, not sure who the collab was with but, congrats to them too, tons of emotion here, which i enjoyed immensely, the "swerve" line was my favorite, and overall a wonderful and fulfilling poem, great job to the both of you!
john