by HidinVictim Sep 13, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I suppose its not fair |
by KJ
Now this is pure perfection! The emotion throughout the entire piece is what really stood out to me. A lot of writers fail to just write exactly what/how they feel, and you did an amazing job with that. I believe that this would be a great choice for your school mag. Loved everything about it. Beautifully written. 5/5 |
This poem had a lot of emotion coming from it. Yes. love does hurt. but what would life be with out heartbreak? i think its a win win situation. if your with your love your happy. if youve split up youve gained wisdom. i like how you said |
Wow, this truly was a work of art. I'd rather not critique this one because its beautiful. The emotion put into this is just so amazing.. there are no words. It's so sad in its own way because we've all been there, and we all know what it feels like.. the disappointment, and all of the other emotions that are flowing through us. This piece showed it all. Simply amazing, gorgeously written |
I suppose its not fair |
by Inuhanyo
I wont take back my promises, I will always love you and I dont want this to be the "end" unless it fades unto that. I love you still, always will as I said I would.. the arguement was a dumb sense of self pride of my part that shouldnt ever have come out to you. |