So what I got from this, since I'm in a major monologue thing at the moment...this could really be great to read aloud. The emotions are strong. And the way I picture it is....speaking to yourself. "friend" could be youreslf. but also...i saw you saying this to monique. or me a few months ago...

this was great. very dark, strong, moving...

5/5

Very well written. I loved it! Keep up the good work 5/5.

Very interesting. i enjoyed it very much.