Comments : Love forever Doomed

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow... This poem.. is incredible... I can relate and I love it so much.

    my favorite stanza:

    So my darling ill see u soon
    Once again we will be forever doomed
    But at least together
    We burn in hell forever

    wow... that's just awesome! :]

    5/5

    going on my favs!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Great job of incorporating literary elements gilry!
    very sad and heartfelt poem
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Bianca The Queen Of Hearts

    Oh my god that last verse sent shivers down my spine!

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    It so really sad=(what a great poem..like it!