I wish I could help with this one but right now there is a big emprty space in my head and heart.

WOW!! i love it! its so powerful!

Reminds me of me LOL great job!

Emptiness builds a home of a girl
like a virus its spreads
to every part of this decaying soul
eating away at every connecting thread

This was really good. There were a few spots where the flow was.. off, a tiny bit. ^^^this stanza is one of them. One thing i can think of that might help, "Like a virus its spreads" rhymes with "eating away at every connecting thread" but you might want to change the first line to "Like a virus it is spread" because "its spreads" is grammatically incorrect... otherwise, good job!
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*Chaotic Angel*

It is very hard to get out of this circle of pain and depression once you are in...you have described it very vividly...
Good job!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid