Absolutely amazing. Wonderful write that caught my attention and even left me thinking about evey bit of it. I like this stanza"
I understand that one day I will leave this world
And like footprints in sand slowly drift away
I'll become a tombstone in a distant graveyard
My name left with a date marking my journey today". Waw you left me speechless. All i can say is you are very talented and i enjoy your poems. Very well done, kel.
15 years ago
by Alvaro
Where reality isn't something that can dawn on me
that line is what shaked me up and told me that these words are coming from someone and not just another face walking down the street good write man