Beautiful, and you are right this is similar to mine, i like it, very good flow and rythm

5/5

Wow Val, a very emotional poem. It's very true, how we are wild and untamed. And if we do, er it's not the same. But we have been distracted by everything in our lives, that we dont notice all the changes we've made, and the bad ones. We are so blind to the obvious. But this poem, was very good, it just said it all. And I'm sure if others read it, they'd say the same, Val.

Well great job on the poem, it was excellent. ^.^

5/5

Weel done and sad to say true.

"(...) Love, Happiness, and Peace
The only true things
We really, Ever, Need."

I'm with you in that. In fact, the world needs something more than a simple charity: action for the welfare, big changes to make a better reality. It is not easy live on reality, but we must live in a better way with our fantasies (the men are wrong when they say that fantasy it's just for children and fools). Is maybe the fantasy out of their? That's my wonder. I hope so not (I got big hopes yet, after all).

Good writing!

Greetings.

Perhaps we need another "bohemian philosophy" to our minds and hearts to improve the world. Live or not to live? that's the question ;)

I loved the meaning behind your words here. When man is free without matieral problems theyre truly happy. I had to write an essay on that so I know where you're coming from. Well done...it was flawless.

*5/5*