Beautiful

by Lesslovedthanloathed   Sep 13, 2008


You say "I don't want beauty."
And I say "But you're just that,"
Beautiful, Inside and out.
You're beautiful, more than you know,
Baby its true I swear it
You're one beautiful girl.

Its not just the moment,
Its not temporary insanity
And I refuse to plead otherwise.
How can I make you believe?
I've got nothing up my sleeve,
So believe me when I say you're beautiful.

There's no other way to put it,
How can I get through to you?
Its just plain truth that you're beautiful.
No other can even compare,
No matter how much you deny,
You're the most beautiful in my eyes.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I really loved this poem. The concept to is was exactly as titled: Beautiful. The flow was a little off, but the word usage was brilliant. And I can't even begin to talk about how wonderful this poem really is. It's such an enjoyable read and so easy to relate to. 5/5 for sure!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I love this poem, once again I can relate to it. My bf tells me the same thing but I like to argue with him about :) I let him win that one. The flow was great and so was the wording and the format. Another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. This is so beautifully written. A heartfelt piece.
    Your word choice was parallel through the whole piece.
    and your wording was nicely done.
    I absolutely love that last paragraph
    A perfect ending for such a great piece. 5/5

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