I see you went Kenney Chesney on the last line. Lol. But anyway this poem was better
than the one I read previous to the other.
But again flow was rocky but not too bad.
Honesly I didn't not like the last stanza at all though it kinda ruined the poem.
5/5
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Very touching poem. The flow was excellent, word usage was amazing, and the concept was beautiful. I could feel a lot of emotion flowing through this entire poem. Great poem. 5/5 for sure!

Wow,, nice poem - love the ending.