This was a good poem! I like how you ended perfectly. I have a really hard time ending my poems blah, good job.

I like this poem but i wondered why you'd called it 'deja vu', is it the french way...

Deja vu means to see something again, and the guy that this is about is a lot like my ex so i called it deja vu.

Sorry deja vu means something you'd already seen( being i'm french), but it doesn't matter your poem is great

Lol thanks