Hi your poem was nice, you say you're new so maube a pointer or two, dont use comma's at the end of a sentence and start all your sentences with capitals its normal in most poetry, dont start your sentence with and.

by Baleria

I look at her so beautiful, so captive
I wonder, do you still love her
Am I just a toy to you?
Or do you really love me like you say
Would you really prefer me, so plain and simple,
To her, so, so beyond-beautiful....

JUst a suggestion use it or not

Grant