Comments : Our world starting with me

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow thats a powerful poem,,, nicely done

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Makalah....
    Makalah....
    This is.... incredible. It's breath-taking. I love what you are saying. It started out really good.. so I was like... awwa yeah beautiful... when u write about lettin gout your confessions I am thinking "awww il lbe there for her..." then you keep on going... kicking a##...

    you say it like i t should be, people should all be equal... who cares if you are more popular, don't let others down...
    and i love the end... you realize...
    that the only thing u can start with...
    is yourself.
    you are one very very very smart 12 yr. old.
    i really look up to you, sweetheart.

    this is wonderful.

    take care of yourself.

    love you :)
    Val 5/5