A Mysterious Key.

by Courageous Dreamer   Sep 13, 2008


I give you this key that holds so much power.
There's only one thing that it can unlock.
It's something that means everything to me.
You are to keep this forever, to never throw it away.
If you were to throw it away, you'd be throwing away me.

I'm giving you this, because you've deserved it.
Please be careful, never abuse or leave it behind.
Always keep it in your possession, don't misplace it.
Don't drop it. If you do, it will no longer unlock my treasure.
Hold it with pride, shine a true smile on your face everytime.

This mysterious key unlocks nothing but my fragile heart.
Be careful, be extremely cautious. Do not allow it to crack.
If my heart cracks, it's going to die and shatter to pieces,
I've already been through that, don't be a heart breaker.
I trust you with this key, I trust you with my heart.

Once you unlock my heart, you will be mine forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Overflowing with emotion. Astonishing flow. Excellent word usage. And the concept was brilliant. What more can I say? Perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Well, I really like the emotion and
    the story. Really cute, but, I found
    some flaws. The poem didn't flow
    so smoothly. And I didn't like how you
    used the word crack in two sentences
    side by side. And you didn't just for
    that one particular word you did for
    other words too which is a major flow
    throw off. But other than that I really
    liked it. 5/5
    <3tay

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