Ice Cold Tear

by BloodyBrokenAngel   Sep 13, 2008


Once upon a time
we were as one
it felt like forever
but had only begun

once upon in that time
you loved me more than ever
you said that you would die for me
and that we'd always be together

one day, you never called
weeks passed, we never talked
every night i lay awake
with my eyes on the ticking clock

once i thought love would never end
but what i thought was wrong
you loved me, but you left me
at least you're where you belong

but where i belong
i might never know
it would be in your arms
but you just had to go

even though you broke my heart
i will always be here
forever i will love you
and in my eyes, an ice cold tear

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    I really like this poem...your a gifted writer 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    One day, you never called
    weeks passed, we never talked
    every night i lay awake
    with my eyes on the ticking clock

    I love this stanza . It's so easy to relate to , just like the rest of your poem . I absolutely love the rhymes , although your flow needs a little improuvement . Still , 5/5 for sure .

  • 16 years ago

    by Grunge Angel

    Damn,..thats a good poem. I can feel the emotion behind it. Great job and keep writing!