Damn,..thats a good poem. I can feel the emotion behind it. Great job and keep writing!

One day, you never called
weeks passed, we never talked
every night i lay awake
with my eyes on the ticking clock

I love this stanza . It's so easy to relate to , just like the rest of your poem . I absolutely love the rhymes , although your flow needs a little improuvement . Still , 5/5 for sure .

I really like this poem...your a gifted writer 5/5