You were right it was really cliche, but you know what.. the feeling of love is cliche it's self, so you can't really help it! I'm sure this poem could be related by many, I can relate to this in a different way kind of. I would have definatly liked someone more unique of course, something original, something so much more descriptive. You could definatly flip this poem around 180 degrees and make it sound so much more romantic and original. I would edit if I were you, use a thesarus or something. It works, and you learn new words along the way. Anyways, very beautiful and adorable.. falling in love, giving someone that key to your heart, being in their arms.. it's a girls dream. :] Well doneeee, just make it more of your own! 5/5

Omg that was such a great poem i loved it sooo much. it reminded me of if i wrote it it was really good keep up the work 5/5
-kasia

Good job, kept it short and sweet and straight to the meaning.

Awww thats sooo sweet and to much love.....=) keep it up okay (^_^) 5/5