Redemption

by Nate the philosopher   Sep 14, 2008


As i fell from the heavens i thought
"she was my love
she was my soul
and i let her go"
the wind passing by my body
as i feel weightless
i cry
i now know why i fall from heaven
i know why god throws me out of paradise
i let one of gods angels go
i let her fall into the hands of the devil
andas i come to the gates of hell
i do not fear the devil
i wait to see him
to fight him so he lets that beutiful angel go
to win her freedom
.........to win my redemption

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  • 15 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    This one is very well written. could've have written it better myself.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Q

    This is a pretty good poem nate!

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Very unike, never seen anything like it done before :) Really well writen and heartfelt

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