Your everything

by Fantasy   Sep 14, 2008


Your the sweetest thing,
And when you smile,
I melt into the sun.

In this crazy life,
The times we spend,
Laughing and crying,
Cause all I care about,
Is our days together.

Hand in hand,
Entwined into each other,
It's the first time I've fallen so hard.

Please don't ruin this,
You are everything,
Your the crazy days,
Your the hazy times.

In this crazy life,
The days we spent,
Arms linked,
Your everything.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow, cute! haha :} I think this would've been fine in the love/romance category, but nevertheless a good poem. It's simple and sweet, the feeling it emits is just so amazing that i can't help but to smile :]

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Really good way of expressing your emotions. The flow was good and the concept was great. But the word usage could've been a little better. All in all a great poem. Keep it up! :)